Review ↠ PDF, DOC, TXT, eBook or Kindle ePUB free ´ Lisa ValdezT of play and variety adventure etc in books My main problem was Matthew I felt love from him for his exfiance Rosalind in Passion than in this book for Patience Rosalind hurt him bad and now he is on the rebound and no woman was ever going to rule him again and that is what I believe after reading this He didn t just want to be master in the bedroom but now was a total control freak who wanted to control and rule Patience totally He wrote and got an important music tuition cancelled just to keep her from leaving and the spanking in the rain was close to abusive as Patience was crying I hated his dont hide your tears they please me Maybe I just like my Heros to comfort the women they love when they are crying not keep hitting them There was no romance or love in him even when he was giving her a compliment it sounded false and cold Clearly Matthew was always a Dominant but now it seemed that Matthew at last got someone he could bend to his will mentally as well as physicallyand no way was he letting her go lovehell no possesionyes It was like brainwashing a girl who was in awe of him and trusted him If it pleases me it will please you you will get your pleasure through my pleasure repeating constantly over and over I also don t get the point of the bible otes and bible referances Did god not create eve in answer to adams needs and desiresMen carry the staff of their dominance between their legs what greater proof can there be that feminine submission is gods willetcI think it is clear what Matthew thought of women here only for the pleasure of men As I have said I dont mind reading about a manwoman wanting to be master in the bedroom and the SubDom theme it was cold arrogant Matthew both inside and outside the bedroom I disliked I like my HH to believe they are euals and if this story was real life I could see Patience in a couple of years still worshipping him and browbeaten asking him could she se the loo Please Matthew Thank You Matthew This book is a story of submission and a control freak it is not a love story I hated it but kept reading in the hope that LV might redeem the characters well she didnt it just got worseWhat I did like was Fitzroy and Micky Wilkes and they are the reason this book got a star and I hope they are in the next book if they are I will buy it and hope it as enjoyable as Passion OK I had a hard time deciding what to rate this book that s why it took me so long to write this review I have just recently reread Passion and LOVED it very much even the second time around I was wanting to get my hands on Patience badly after waiting 5 years for the book Those of you who know my tastes in books know that I like my books steamy hot I d rather read romantica than erotica though I must say that I don t care too much for submission domination and pain for pleasure type of books I personally just don t get it I had a hard time with feeling the love between Patience and Matt during all of the sex scenes That s what they were doing having sex not making love Now on the other hand I must say I felt the love they had for each other in the normal day to day living just not when they had sex I wonder why Lisa decided to take this rout with this book Was it to shock everyone so that this book would be talked about so that people would want to see for themselves what they thought So what I m saying is I did not like the sex scenes at all in this book They were not for meI also want to say that except for the sex scenes I really enjoyed the rest of the book I liked the story a LOT and was really happy that Lisa included Passion Mark and Aunt Matty in this book If the sex scenes were not written as they were this would have been a 4 or 5 star book for me I am curious to "see what my buddies here think of this book so please "what my buddies here think of this book so please t let my review change your mind about reading it Everyone has different tastes and views and for all I know you might love it or hate it I read but I snoreth Incoherent Blasphemous Song of Verity 54After getting a glimpse the 1st 63 pages itting it a week ago I forced myself to resume this excruciatingly painful read times I had this weird grin plastered on my face My enflamed senses wept from the ensuing hilarity triggered by the steady rivulets of inane dialogues extremely purple prose As the twilight approached I thought the veins on my hands were turning purple from reading the sketchy marathon of adjectives It could be that my bleary eyes were playing tricks on me The monotonic book s inundated w a flurry of HH s cock cods clitoris cunt s hyperactivities clenching tingling ivering dripping pounding throbbing pulsing weeping twitching watering bloating swelling sweating writhing aching palpitating etc She really cracked the jackpot w this simmering concoction The half baked romance is just
a camouflage no substance beneath it If they cut down the orgasmiccamouflage no substance beneath it If they cut down the orgasmic grinding cumming all U get is prolly just 1 % of romance There s not a lotta heart angst If I read 1 His cock throbbed Her clitoris pulsed I d scream but I didn t wanna wake p my sleep deprived family If I were an editor I d be too embarrassed to subject potential readers w this atrocious claptrap Matt doesn t even tear Patience asunder w his power of luv cue Celine Dion s eardrums splitting rendition of The power of luv ntil page 302 In this overly distended 360 page book we get interminable pages pages of Matt degrading the TSTF too stupid to fuck Patience cuz her divine purpose is merely as his convenient stretchable fuckhole We should applaud him for restraining himself from bathing his rampant cock in her sacred virginal blood Patience is his virtueI gotta find another mindless book to cleanse my reading palate self resuscitate my luv for romance porn I felt like spraying Patience s clitoris w a potent anesthetic Her blood pulsed her clitoris pulsed in recognition of his presence W Matt s constant adjusting of his tight pants I pondered if it woulda been prudent despite his dire financial straits if he d just custom make baggy pants to accommodate his ever present boner whenever Patience s ballooning elastic sex is in the vicinity The conflict cello vs Matt s insatiable prick My cello is important because it challenges me never disappoints me And despite the fact that it is but wood string it comforts satisfies me Hmm Yeah sure So does Matt s throbbing cock sweetie I d pick Matt s fri. Sionate kiss with an enigmatic man awakens a powerful need in her But can she reconcile her desire for him with her desire for a life that's her own And what will she do when he shows her a part of herself she never knew existedWhen the secret of his illegitimate birth pushes Matthew Morgan Hawk from his place in society the da. .
I read Passion about 4 years ago while searching for really good smutty romance I immediately fell in love with it After reading romance for almost 20 years it s amazing to find a romance author that can surprise you and surprise me Lisa Valdez didYesterd CONTAINS SPOILERSvvvvAs you can see I have not given this book any s and if I could I would give negative s IMHO this book was so bad that after reading hundreds of books this book has the distinction of being the only one I could not finishI had an idea about the theme before I even started but I felt I could keep an open mind I tried really I tried to be nderstanding and I have read other books that deal with bdsm and haven t had a problem with themI thought it would be the same with this As I started reading at first I was mildly Brothers uncomfortable and then started disliking the characters especially Matthew I read on and skimmed over all the punishments and humiliations as much as I could The i read the disturbed andncomfortable I felt I then came to the part in the book where Matthew gave Patience an nending hard spanking that would in my opinion not only bruise severely but would break the skin and possibly break bones Next to add insult to injury Matthew said Your tears make me hot and hard and I will never tire of them But of course they are not a reprieve It was at this point I was doneI am not a violent person but if Matthew were a real person I think I would have to kick his ass I have never disliked a character in a book and I don t think much of Patience either for allowing or liking this treatment I loved the first book Passion and felt there was real love between Mark and Passion I didn t feel any love between Matthew and Patience only a sick kind of dominance over someone else that was cruel and selfishWhat a huge disappointment As I read Patience a few things stood out for meThe virginal heroine Patience has an interesting family trait thick distended nipples She s also is skilled at giving fellatio because when she and her sisters where little girls they spotted one of their maids servicing their butler From that educational viewing they decided to grab some cucumbers from their family s garden and practice their sucking techniues Patience becomes so good at servicing cucumbers that she soon wins the very excerpt at not scoring the skin blue ribbon Patience also enjoys having her bottom spanked by the hero countless times over the other incredible sexual pleasures his is than willing to give herThe hero Matthew deeply appreciates Patience s skills at fellatio so much s PLOT SPOILERS AND EXPLICIT LANGUAGE WARNINGSo here is what I think is the set p for the storyMatthew is devastated after his bastardy is exposed by his mother nice lady to be sure who writes a letter to the London Times The ton snubs him friends desert him his fiancee dumps him and his business interests are threatened with failure Patience is his new sister in law He yearns for her but thinks he must regain his standing and set some wrongs to right before she can be his I m not sure how he will deal with all of this however because he spends vir 25 3 rotten peaches STARS Then I am Pluto god of the nderworld and I want you I shall steal you away and hide you in my shadow I shall chain you to my side and demand your submission I shall take everything from you and in the doing give you everything you desire And you YOU SHALL LIGHT MY DARK WORLD MATTHEW Patience Emmalina Dare a lady of exceptional desire And you YOU SHALL LIGHT MY DARK WORLD MATTHEW Patience Emmalina Dare a lady of exceptional and intelligence has a ite long list of male admirers that spin around her at every public event but none can boil her blood and make her heart flutter like her new brother in law Matthew can Patience doesn t want a fairytale HEA She doesn t want marriage and children Not since her cello instructor ripped her heart and stumped on it No she just wants her terrible loneliness to come to an end And only Matthew seems to be capable of doing thatso why not give herself to him for one night Surely one night will be enough Unlike ever before her dreams now had form and substance Now her dreams came with eyes of a dove the face of an angel and the strong hand of a pagan god PATIENCE Matthew Morgan Hawk s life has changed tremendously since the secret that he is an illegitimate son had become public knowledge He s been socially snubbed and ignored he s been dumped by his loving fiancee he s been deserted by almost all of his close friends and now he is on the verge of being financially ruined by
his ex father in law At the lowest point of his life there is only oneex father in law At the lowest point of his life there is only one in his life that is still shining bright The beautiful Patience his own goddess his own Persephone Matthew knows that only Patience can fulfill his desires and give him what he really needsso why not take her and make her HIS for one night Surely one night will be enough But I shall make you fit me Patience His eyes captured hers I will fck you he said on a harsh whisper thrusting into her And fck you And fck you UNTIL YOU FIT MATTHEW So why only 25 stars The heavy BDSM themed sex scenes I certainly wouldn t call this book a Historical ROMANCE nope this is very obviously an erotica A well written but nnecessary oneI mean I can easily summarize the first %70 of the book with Matthew cuming like the fiery waters of the river Styx his cum a fierce and flowing tide while Patience finds her rapture while drinking voraciously of the virile communication he feeds her The rather long explanations about obedience discipline and submission the numerous scenes of Matthew spanking Patience s bottom for his pleasure and therefore her pleasure countless paragraphs with swollen clitorises and engorged pricks because of the fact that the heroine is a virgin and would like to remain sowell let s just say these all EXHAUSTED THE SHT OUT OF METhe surprisingly pleasant 69 ing oral sex scene was though THE HOTTEST BLOWJOB This was like a HOW TO book in my opinion HOW TO MAKE SOMEONE TOTALLY SUBMIT or A LESSON IN BRAINWASHING might have being a better title The DomSub theme wasn t the only problem for me as it is in most erotic books and I don t mind it But this book takes it to the extreme and beyond In one scene Matthew teased Patience then left her tied to the bed for HOURS I personally think most women would heve stood on his head if he did that to them but each to their own and I am totally open minded to a bi. A woman called Patience A desire that would put her name and love to the testKnown for her exceptional beauty Patience Emmalina Dare has been pursued by admirers ever since coming of age But as suitor after suitor fails to inspire her love or her desire she is certain she will never find a man who touches her deeply Until a pas. Ggin instrument of pleasure to pluck my strings There s also her lips on practice w the infamous cucumbers Why not the bedpost or hairbrush Dudette it s a sad state of affairs indeed when hormones are raging ncontrollably only thick cucumbers get The New Competition utilized as instruments of pleasure The HH s characterizations are as deep as their bubbly frothy cum Her redundant verbage irrelevant parody are a testament to what happens when an editor buys a 1 way ticket to snoozefest gives a widely established author full reign to cram as many repetitive trashy phrases during her 5 years of writing Could the delay be cuz the purple prose wasn t purple enuff that the draft got sent back to crank itp another notch Who gives a fig Mayhap this is simply a springboard to pop the next installment out in another 5 years Methinks my fav scenes are the clinical 69 scene Patience s Domestic Slavery Considered as a Scriptural Institution by Francis Wayland and Richard Fuller undignified leg humping clitoris rupturing scene rabid doggy style I almost burst a spleen as I drowned in my ownnforeseen chortles Not trying to pick apart a fluffly timeless masterpiece here it s just too campy for words My fav lines vital descriptions tightening her legs around his rugged hipsHe felt no pity for her passionate distress Feel the power of my love I will fuck U Mini Habits for Weight Loss: Stop Dieting. Form New Habits. Change Your Lifestyle Without Suffering. until U fit she s not shopping for shoes Payless His ponderous prick rose florid darkMove over Bertrice Small the grande dame of purple prose has arrived in town LV is the reigningeen rolls out red carpet Did I luv every friggin minute of it Nope but it s gloriously bad 2 stars for sheer audacity This was a kind of Dr JekyllMr Hyde book for me On one hand you have a traditional well written romantic historical with a decent plot which I truly enjoyed On the other hand you have a smutty sometimes vulgar historical erotica which at first I thought was kind of hot But after reading page after page of how to have sex without actual penetration I was rolling my eyes his boiling cods her gushing Children of the New World uim shaking my head the porntastic acrobaticpside down oral sex scene the irrumatio scene definition right here and cringing spanking her bottom for his pleasure and therefore her pleasure Was Lisa Valdez trying to shock the reader Titillate Maybe All I know is that once the hard spanking commenced she lost me Ouch I don t mind a smutty historical I thought Passion was smutty but hot I guess what I didn t like was the direction that LV took with the sex scenesTo explain Our lonely but beautiful red haired heroine cello playing Patience Dare younger sister of Passion from the book Passion is not looking for love or a traditional HEA of a husband or children since being spurned years ago by her cello instructor What She s giving p after one failed attempt at love Everyone she loves always leaves Patience one way or another her mother died her sister Passion became busy raising their younger sister her cello teacher Henri spurned her so she s not putting her heart out there again However she is attracted to her new brother in law the darkly handsome Matthew Hawk brother of Mark from PassionmaybeMatt s been going through some scandalous tough times he just found out he s been born a bastard and it s the talk of the ton He faces financial and social ruin because of the revelation in the newspapers that he was fathered by a common gardener Horrors His fiancee has dumped him and his ex future father in law Lord Benchley is hell bent on destroying him since he thinks Matt knew all along about the circumstances of his birth he didn t and lied to him The only bright spot in his life right now is Patience who he s hungered for since he first met herTo make a long story short Matt makes a move on Patience She tells him she can t give him love Matt says that s okay he s sworn off love himself I know what you need and only I can give it to you or something like that Patience bites and they have a wild old time where Patience learns that what she longs for is to submit and Matt teaches her the many ways she can submit to him and give him pleasurebecause his pleasure will lead
TO HER PLEASURE ETC THIS GOESher pleasure etc This goes and on as Matt and Patience who turns out to be a master at fellatio since she practiced on a cucumber as a teen progress from him teaching her to submit to his wishes lick my cods spread your legs and rest your heels on the edge of the mantle to teaching her all about obeying and discipline Along the way they discover that they really have come to need each other and that maybe love isn t such a far fetched idea But will Matt s thirst for revenge against those who have wronged him get in the way of their happinessEven though I wasn t all too keen on the direction LV took with the love scenes bondage and spanking to hurt just isn t my cuppa outside of the bedroom I could really feel the love that Matt and Patience had for each other Just something about them not being euals in the bedroom buggedirked me even though Patience was a willing and eager that girl was constantly gushing participant But if that kind of bedroom action doesn t bug you I m sure you ll love this book I enjoyed the plot the
Characters Were Mostly Likablewere mostly likable plenty kinky and somehow I even shed a few tears at the end I especially loved Matt s declaration of love to Patience when he finally figured out in which direction he wanted to take his life Each chapter starts out with a verse from the biblical Song of Solomon and there s references to the mythological Persephone Patience and PlutoHades Matthew and Adam and Eve which I found rather interesting While this wasn t ite The Rabbit Who Wants to Go to Harvard up to theality of Passion it was pretty good and it managed to entertain me I hope LV has plans to write not only about youngest sister Primrose but also Matt s friend Lord Fitz Roy and the young street lad Mickey Wilkes I sense a good story there I just hope we don t have to wait years for them 4 stars 5 intense controversial powerful stars Those of you who have read Passion know that most people either loved it or hated it and the same holds true for Patience I fall into the love it camp and will not apologize nor feel ashamed for doing so The language and sexuality are just as raw and edgy in Patience as they were in Passion so if you were hoping for a tamer book you ll be disappointed I however loved itDescriptionA woman called PatienceA desire that would put her name and love to the testKnown for her exceptional beauty Patience Emmalina. Rkly handsome half brother of the Earl of Langley plots his resurrection and his revenge Betrayed and abandoned by the women he believed loved him he swears never again to be controlled by love But despite his vow he is Quantum (Captain Chase unable to resist Patience whose strength and self reliance mask a need that he is perfectly suited to fulfull.